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20 February 2010 @ 09:58 am
[fic] underwater kisses  
Underwater Kisses
donghae/eunhyuk. 945 words. r. romance, implied!smut
Donghae knew he should not get jealous over TV shows. He knows, but as always it’s the hardest thing to do.




“THREE MINUTES HAVE PASSED!!”


Donghae’s breathing was coming hard and his head was beginning to hurt. Drawing up his courage, Donghae glanced at him. Yeah, there he was, naturally and gratefully had his lips pressed to Sungmin’s. He felt his head pounded a lot.
He couldn’t take this anymore.


Gathering all his strength Donghae pushed upward, craving for air.


“Huaah!” he gasped, taking as much air as he could in one breath.


Donghae could feel blood rushing to his head as he saw Sungmin hyung pressing his lips desperately to Hyukjae’s. No, his.


“Yah Donghae! Donghae. After three minutes and ten seconds, how was your breathing?” he heard Shindong-yup asked loudly, trying to get his attention back. Right, this damn show must go on.


Putting on his best learned smile plastered on his face, Donghae shook his head, “No, it’s way too difficult! My head hurt.” he said, aware that the other group’s so called ‘experiment’ is still continuing. Gritting his teeth so hard that it hurts, he found himself laughing bitterly as Hyukjae rejected Kangin and reached out for Sungmin when he should have asked for him, Donghae, his boyfriend instead.


“Hahaha.” Just great.



.:|:.



“Aaaand, Six minutes passed!!” exclaimed Shindong-yup like a good MC he was. Donghae heard everybody including himself cheered happily.


“Ok! Please come up! Come up!”


His smile faltered slightly as he saw Sungmin continued giving Hyukjae air, not even aware of the others. Engrossed much? he thought. Could not take it anymore, he marched off toward them and pulled Hyukjae upward, glaring at his brightly smiling face.


“It’s over.” Donghae muttered grudgingly, dragging him to the side. He saw him beamed proudly at Sungmin, waving his thumb up and found himself unconsciously hardened his grip around Hyukjae’s wrist. Hyukjae flinched.


-


They were coming out of the pool to have a shower when Donghae called,


“Hyukkie...” Hyukjae turned around only to face a glaring Donghae. Knowing pefectly well where this was going on, Hyukjae could only sighed.


“Hae, that was only for show. Sungmin-hyung was giving me air, not kissing me”



Donghae gripped his wrist and pulled him into the pool. Hyukjae tried to protest and let go of himself but Donghae’s grip was too strong. “Haeee” he whined, annoyed.


“The water’s really cold and I want to take a showe― ummmph!” Hyukjae couldn’t finish his sentence as his mouth was suddenly occupied by another pair of lips, crashing harshly against his own. He tried to fight off at first but in the end he gave up. It’s better to let Donghae have his way and end this quickly.


“H-hae!” gasped Hyukjae as he felt the other’s hand slipped under his swimming trunk, rubbing his hardening member. Hyukjae let out a throaty moan against the younger man lips, parting his own lips in action, letting Donghae shoved his tongue inside.


“Uhh, Hyukkie…” panted Donghae while sucking and tasting the inside of his boyfriend’s mouth. He pushed Hyukjae’s body against the pool’s cold tiles, making the other shiver from the cold.


Hyukjae willed himself and tried to push Donghae away. “H-hae, we’re in a fucking pool! What if someone see us?!” he whispered breathlessly. He then pushed himself upward and sits on the side, trying to stand up but unfortunately for him, Donghae was faster and suddenly arms were around his waist, holding him down.


“They are showering, they won’t see us.” breathed Donghae, looking up from his standing position in the pool. Hyukjae gulped as he saw the aroused expression in his lover’s face. Donghae then quickly grabbed the waistband of the other’s swimming trunk, tugging it down lustfully, exposing Hyukjae’s erected cock to the cold water. ”I need to clean you up first baby.” he murmured softly while Hyukjae thought hard about what his little cock has to do with him kissing being given air by Sungmin.


Donghae smirked at the sight and quickly engulfed his Hyukkie’s whole length into his mouth. He felt Hyukjae shuddered at this and began sucking and bobbing his head, giving it teasing licks and sucks. Hyukjae moaned out loud,


“Hae, they might not see, but they can still hear us” he said, trying to reason before letting out another pleasured moan loudly.


“You should shut your mouth up then” replied Donghae, looking up with Hyukjae’s member still inside his mouth, smirking widely.

-


“Where are Hyukjae and Donghae?” asked Leeteuk, drying his hair with towel, at Hangeng. The china man just shrugged uninterestedly and went to Heechul. Leeteuk rolled his eyes at him.


“Knowing Donghae, they would probably in some dark corners right now.” snickered Kangin, cocking his eyebrows suggestively. All the other members except for Leeteuk and Sungmin laughed out loud, giving agreeing nods and yeses.


“Huh? What do you mean, Kangin? What the hell would they do in some dark corners?” asked the confused Leeteuk, demanding answers.


“The same thing I know Kyuhyun will do to me when we got home, hyung” muttered Sungmin darkly, shivering at the thought.


At that the members laughed again while Leeteuk made a sympathetic sound of understanding.



“Oh.”


Leeteuk didn’t ask anything about the two missing boys again, instead, he patted Sungmin’s back and silently prayed for Hyukjae’s well being, hoping Donghae remembers that they have a dance show in two days. Hell, it would be a disaster if Hyukjae can't dance properly or even at all there.



He then tried to control his bandmates who were roaring in laughters, oblivious to Hyukjae’s gurgled moans and screams under the water.




author's note: lol i totally forgot about this. i wrote this long time ago, when i re-watched the EHB ^^~ ep 12 is totally epic, yes?
 
 
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all hail the scorpio ficwar queenakihikaru on February 20th, 2010 02:03 am (UTC)
ninja unni! XDDDDDDDD SPOT
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 02:04 am (UTC)
lol first time you commenting on my fic
is this ok to read??
(no subject) - akihikaru on February 20th, 2010 02:08 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - akihikaru on February 20th, 2010 02:07 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 02:11 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - akihikaru on February 20th, 2010 02:13 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 03:13 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - akihikaru on February 20th, 2010 11:51 am (UTC) (Expand)
xcamerarawrxcamerarawr on February 20th, 2010 03:42 am (UTC)
spot!
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:31 am (UTC)
xD
w.e.f.l.o.a.t.a.b.o.v.e: Angelscloudyday2sb on February 20th, 2010 03:44 am (UTC)
YAY YOU'RE WRITING AGAIN~~~

WHOOPEE /THOUSAND MILLION STARS
COMPLETELY EPIC*jumps around like the mentally unstable person i am*
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 05:08 am (UTC)
LOL BUT IVE BEEN WRITING A LOT LATELY BB xD

Thank you so muchh<333 *jumps with you*

we are all mentally unstable dear
Abbycherrybeylla on February 20th, 2010 03:48 am (UTC)
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD8

poor hyukkie! i hope he is alright!! XD
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:35 am (UTC)
xDDDDDDDD

yeah ofc hes alright! hae wouldnt do anything to hurt him,, just something harsh i guess lol

thank youu<3
mister fish, did you die?tees2mai on February 20th, 2010 03:54 am (UTC)
LATE SPOT
mister fish, did you die?tees2mai on February 20th, 2010 04:02 am (UTC)
jslkfjslkfjldjdskjfskjd

hae must have sexed hyuk up so good after the eppy!
(no subject) - fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:36 am (UTC) (Expand)
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just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:37 am (UTC)
Kyumin is rubbing on me! xDDD

me too! it was too epic lol

thank youu <3
ShiShi™idioticvampyr on February 20th, 2010 04:07 am (UTC)
ahhh~ explorers... a good show..

LOLz... this is... nice...:D wuved it.... vewy much... ahaha...XD
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 05:30 pm (UTC)
yeahhh i miss those days

lol thank you so much! <3
dbsj0001dbsj0001 on February 20th, 2010 04:22 am (UTC)
OMO~
jealous much hae!? ;P
poor hyukkie~... and minnie too!

i remember this episode! it was epic! xD
TY for writing this!
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 05:31 pm (UTC)
lol we all know hae is a big jealous <3

lol i just had to put kyumin in xD
thank you for reading this!
leona_green: Super Junior//Donghae//sushow IIleona_green on February 20th, 2010 05:56 am (UTC)
Lol, jealous! Hae from this ehb episode is always amusing to read ♥
And this is no fail! I miss reading your fics ♥
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 05:38 pm (UTC)
*screams* I LOVE YOUR FIC ABOUT THIS EP TOO BB<3333
it is actually :| but THANK YOU SO MUCH<3

awww i realised ive been writting only haehyuk smut the past weeks lol

someday ill make it up to you<3 eunhae otw!!
(no subject) - leona_green on February 20th, 2010 06:11 pm (UTC) (Expand)
letmeflyaway: haehyuk balloonmcts051129 on February 20th, 2010 07:05 am (UTC)
spot
letmeflyaway: i can fly -hyukmcts051129 on February 20th, 2010 07:14 am (UTC)
EHB is one of the best shows in the history :D
yeah i did feel jealous for donghae when sungmin and eunhyuk are doing the experiment :$
(no subject) - fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:14 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - mcts051129 on February 21st, 2010 04:27 am (UTC) (Expand)
Claramara_ciro on February 20th, 2010 07:56 am (UTC)
*snickers* LOL at Jealous!Hae during EHB. I could totally imagine Donghae getting all jealous when Hyukkie and Sungmin were kissing exchanging air. How much can I bet that Hae got REALLY rough with Hyukkie after that particular episode? LOL.

Oooh! Ninja!KyuMin. LOL.
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:16 pm (UTC)
lol imma go look for any scheduled dance show or something after that ep xD

kyumin is rubbing on me D8 lol
thank you!
hee_younghee_young on February 20th, 2010 08:10 am (UTC)
Uhaha, jealous Hae! Hope Hyuk is alright... X'''D Love this. <3

.... And I miss reading your fics~.. : <<
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:20 pm (UTC)
he's love yeah? xDD
awww thank youu<3 you are so sweet! i'll try coming up with something.. next week? xD lol *hugs*
foreversjrulesforeversjrules on February 20th, 2010 08:13 am (UTC)
jealous hae is always <3!!!!!!!! poor hyukkie though.. :p

ahh... i need to watch ehb again! :DD
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:24 pm (UTC)
aww we know hyukkie likes it either way lol xD
go watch it again!
thank you<3
trying to fix what's damagedread0write on February 20th, 2010 09:11 am (UTC)
lol yes episode 12 XD

very very nice lol
hopefully hyukkie doesn't die underwater...those gurgling sounds and stuff...it under too long, could drown...
lol sungmin XD why is he upset?
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 25th, 2010 09:48 am (UTC)
LOL thank you<3
he wasnt upset, he's just thinking of the rough *** he's going to get later
he's excited i assure you LOL
Hunny: Hyukie *x*clumzypie on February 20th, 2010 09:16 am (UTC)
Omg, makes me want to watch EHB again >__<
Ninja!KyuMin is win x]
Though I'd like to read the rest of the smut, still awesome story ♥

He then tried to control his bandmates who were roaring in laughters, oblivious to Hyukjae’s gurgled moans and screams under the water.
Lol XD I somehow can totally imagine those sounds~ *cough*
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 25th, 2010 09:50 am (UTC)
sorry for the late rep :(
lol go watch it again bb<3

ahahahha,, sorry about that xD i'll try coming up with a smut next time^^~
i can too xD thank youu~
crossing_bycrossing_by on February 20th, 2010 11:24 am (UTC)
i just wonder if theres someone making fanfic bout hyukjae 'busy' activites in starking like dancing to a very sexy lady :D
hahahaha ... wonder hae will respond to that

more nasty i guess
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 11:31 am (UTC)
thank you!
lol

omg which ep??! do tell me plsss xD
Kim Marchettakimmarchetta on February 20th, 2010 11:47 am (UTC)
SPOT. rofl.
Kim Marchettakimmarchetta on February 20th, 2010 11:56 am (UTC)
EP 12 IS EPIC INDEED. ♥
always in my mind, "oh, hyuk's gonna be in trouble"~
and I kept glancing at Donghae rofl XD
THIS. IS TOO AWESOME *o*
WRITE MOAR. >DDDD
(no subject) - fishydotlove on February 25th, 2010 09:51 am (UTC) (Expand)
kisekiotomekisekiotome on February 20th, 2010 12:03 pm (UTC)
I was craving for EHB episodes and poof
I saw this story
waaaaaaah
I Love you^^
ep 12 is one of my fav EHB episode
jealous Hae is always love *grins*
thanks for this sweetie~
*hugs*
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:23 pm (UTC)
telepathy? xD lol
love you too<3 thanks for reading!
i think im officialy have some kind of fetish to jealous hae lol
*huggles*
anothersujufan: pic#98198941anothersujufan on February 20th, 2010 12:49 pm (UTC)
Oh my, Hae!! Can't you wait until you get home like Kyuhyun??

Love this dear, very nicely written!!

I need to watch ehb ep12 again!! well, maybe not the whole episode, just the part where they were kissing/passing air...

Everyone on youtube was saying, look donghae is jealous!! i haven't seen it yet, so i will squint really hard...

BTW, what about the starking where hyukkie was kissed by the girl?? Why don't you write something bout it?? I will be fun...XD
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 05:27 pm (UTC)
awww thank youu dear<3
well we all know hae is so impatient and a big jealous and is adorable like that
lol

i fed myself up with 'haelookedsojealous' throughout the whole ep lololxD

OH!,, maybe i will^^~ it should be fun LOL
Kohokohoho on February 20th, 2010 01:34 pm (UTC)
I'm just in love with ep 12 *-*
And I really like to read ffs about this *Q*
And I LOVE yours *______*
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 08:21 pm (UTC)
me too! me too!
awwww thank you so much bb<333
*hugs*
hyukhae4ever: hwaaa....hyukhae4ever on February 20th, 2010 04:30 pm (UTC)
that was my fave episode of EHB. Hae's expression when he sees Sungmin gave Hyukkie mouth to mouth breathing was just priceless... lols...

[Leeteuk didn’t ask anything about the two missing boys again, instead, he patted Sungmin’s back and silently prayed for Hyukjae’s well being, hoping Donghae remembers that they have a dance show in two days. Hell, it would be a disaster if Hyukjae can't dance properly or even at all there.]

lol... it will indeed be a disaster... ^^
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 05:34 pm (UTC)
lol tee had left you a spot up there bb<3

IKR! i think i remembered flailing to you about the ep before i write this lol
xDD

HUGE DISASTER *cant even imagine* xD
(no subject) - hyukhae4ever on February 20th, 2010 05:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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hitsu~♥: EUNJAhitsugaya15 on February 20th, 2010 06:12 pm (UTC)
Dx LATE SPOT FOR BUSY ME!

lol i srly had to find time to read this ..."underwater kisses"....i can't resist!!


*attached to comp*

[lookie my icon] xDD love it!
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 20th, 2010 06:17 pm (UTC)
LOL,, its not what you think bb<3
*points at the rating*

awwww THANK YOUU<3
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just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 25th, 2010 09:52 am (UTC)
lol teukie is just so cute^^~

thank youu <3
baby_buggsbaby_buggs on February 20th, 2010 10:18 pm (UTC)
*cracks up* jealous boyfriends. XXDD
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 25th, 2010 09:53 am (UTC)
lol thx :)
jealous!bfs are ttly the best lol xD
goldenapple96goldenapple96 on February 20th, 2010 11:43 pm (UTC)
Lol x) this brings back GREAT memories(:! Possesive!Donghae is always the best policy :D I loved this!
just gotta ♥fishydotlove on February 25th, 2010 09:56 am (UTC)
lol they are great memories indeed,, not about the hyukmin kissing part :(
lmaoo
thank you! i believe we love the same policy bb!! xD
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